Entry Nickname: The Past is Back
Title: WATERS OF OBLIVION
Word Count:
67,000
Genre: Adult Paranormal Suspense
Query:
Reine doesn’t want to die; once was more than
enough. It’s not because she’s afraid of the permanent end to mortal
life. After slipping into the frigid waters of the Venetian lagoon in 1498,
that’s no longer a possibility. It’s actually the reason she’s stopped aging
and can heal almost instantly. No, Reine’s afraid because her new gifts came at
a price: her memories. Forgetting the first twenty-three years
of her existence made Reine swear to maintain her safety – and thereby her past – even
if it meant living a quiet, solitary, and uneventful life.
She’s successful for five centuries, but when the
Georgetown art historian’s invited back to the Serene Republic to
examine a
resurfaced DaVinci, she finds her secret’s been compromised. The
portrait is of
her. More importantly, the painting’s owner was – and still is – Massimo
Baldovini, her husband who also should have died long ago.
Although Reine has no memory of this pompous, domineering, and utterly
irresistible man, Massimo’s desperate to rekindle their relationship.
Reine now has the chance to trade her quirky sock collection, musty
libraries, and
an ordinary life with any mortal she’d surely outlive for the man who’s
apparently loved her for half a millennium. The choice should be easy,
until
she inexplicably gets sick for the first time in five hundred years and
starts
to remember things Massimo wishes would remain buried.
With her immortality – and maybe even her life – on
the line, Reine must determine if she can trust Massimo to save her or
whether she’s just been a pawn in his self-serving plans from the very
beginning.
First 250 words:
Reine clutched her broken hand to
her chest and repeatedly tapped the “Door Close” button with the other. The
pain in her fingers was almost unbearable, but it would be gone soon. Hopefully
it would be soon enough.
As the elevator door slid slowly into place, she looked out into the hotel’s sleek, modern lobby one last time. Thankfully, it was still deserted. This wasn’t unusual given the wintry weather and the late hour, but she knew he had to be right behind her.
He couldn’t catch up. He couldn’t see her. Not just yet.
With a small jolt, the elevator finally began to move upward and she looked at her hand again. It was shaking, but as she flexed her fingers, the last signs of bruising – and of the pain – disappeared. However, that didn’t make her happy.
For the second time in two weeks, she almost inadvertently revealed her secret. A secret her life depended on. She should have just ended the conversation when she fumbled to answer a simple question: “Are you married?”
But she didn’t, and that was mistake number one.
The blunder was a warning sign, and she ignored it. She had uncharacteristically let her guard down. But who wouldn’t have, if they had looked into those eyes or had seen that smile? As always, her heart would be her downfall. That’s why she had avoided listening to it for so long.
Until tonight.
And that’s when she made the second mistake: getting injured.
As the elevator door slid slowly into place, she looked out into the hotel’s sleek, modern lobby one last time. Thankfully, it was still deserted. This wasn’t unusual given the wintry weather and the late hour, but she knew he had to be right behind her.
He couldn’t catch up. He couldn’t see her. Not just yet.
With a small jolt, the elevator finally began to move upward and she looked at her hand again. It was shaking, but as she flexed her fingers, the last signs of bruising – and of the pain – disappeared. However, that didn’t make her happy.
For the second time in two weeks, she almost inadvertently revealed her secret. A secret her life depended on. She should have just ended the conversation when she fumbled to answer a simple question: “Are you married?”
But she didn’t, and that was mistake number one.
The blunder was a warning sign, and she ignored it. She had uncharacteristically let her guard down. But who wouldn’t have, if they had looked into those eyes or had seen that smile? As always, her heart would be her downfall. That’s why she had avoided listening to it for so long.
Until tonight.
And that’s when she made the second mistake: getting injured.
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