Nov 1, 2015

NoQS Wrap up 2015



HUGE thanks to the agents, mentors, entrants, and my wonderful co-host who helped make Nightmare on Query Street such an awesome and successful contest. We had a record number of requests this year. With 88 requests for the Monsters and 83 for the Minions, we more than doubled last years results.

For those who want stats, here's a blog breakdown:

Monsters


Screams: 25
Shrieks: 43
Shivers 20
Total: 88 requests

Most requested: The Stolen Girl 

Minions


Screams: 30
Shrieks: 40
Shivers: 13
Total: 83

Most requested: The Mechanic

Once again, thanks for such an awesome year. If you're working on a new project, don't forget about Query Kombat in June 2016 and Nightmare on Query Street next year! Hope you had a safe and happy Halloween!


Oct 28, 2015

Nightmare on Query Street Agent Round 2015

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Time for the shivers, shrieks, and screams to begin!


Following this post is the Monster Class of 2015



You can head over to Michelle's blog to make more request (but you don't really have too. We all know I have the winning team)



My team is so amazing...


No commenting, cheerleading, etc. Only agents will be able to comment.

But CHEER OVER ON TWITTER! We're going to be under the hashtag #NoQS and we will be having FUN. So vent, be nervous, cheer each other on, and hold hands over Twitter. One of the best parts of contests is seeing how the writer's community gathers and supports each other.

I'll be looking for all my Monsters there. I expect you to be roaring louder than the Minions and Spooks. We're MONSTERS. That's what we do!

For the next two days, agents will have fun ways to request in the contest.

They can SCREAM for a full request.
They can SHRIEK for a 50 page request.
They can SHIVER for a 10 page request.

Agents can make as many requests as they want! So go wild! We have some awesome talent for you to peruse.

GOOD LUCK EVERYONE!! Hope you all get a ton of frighteningly amazing requests!


And remember: Monsters Rule, Minions drool!





Minions running scared Despicable Me 2 Free HD Wallpaper






NoQS Monster 20 - Treasures of Dodrazeb, Adult Hist. Fantasy/Secret Hist.

Name: Susan McPhail
Twitter Handle: @susan_mcphail
Title: THE TREASURES OF DODRAZEB
Genre: Adult Historical Fantasy/Secret History
Word Count: 97K

NoQS Monster 19 - Serengeti, Adult Science Fiction

Name: Jennifer Rockwell Ganoung (writing as J.B. Rockwell)
Twitter Handle: @Rockwell_JB
Title: SERENGETI
Genre: Adult Science Fiction
Word Count: 85K

NoQS Monster 18 - The Stolen Girl, YA Contemp

Name: Lora Douglas
Twitter Handle: @LoraWrites
Title: THE STOLEN GIRL
Genre: YA Contemporary
Word Count: 70K

NoQS Monster 17 - In the Space Between, YA Contemp

Name: Caitlin LaRue
Twitter Handle: @caitlinlarue
Title: IN THE SPACE BETWEEN
Genre: YA Contemporary
Word Count: 63K

NoQS Monster 16 - Such the Vultures Love, Adult Goth. Horror

Name: Meghan Harker
Twitter Handle: @ExquisitelyOdd
Title: SUCH THE VULTURES LOVE
Genre: Adult Gothic Horror
Word Count: 109K

NoQS Monster 15 - Jar of Hearts, YA Mystery w/ elements of Fant.

Name: Melanie Stanford
Twitter Handle: @MelMStanford
Title: JAR OF HEARTS
Genre: YA Mystery with a hint of Fantasy
Word Count: 74K

NoQS Monster 14 - High Crown Chronicles, YA Hist. Fantasy

Name: Jodi Gallegos
Twitter Handle: @DisgruntledMom
Title: THE HIGH CROWN CHRONICLES
Genre: YA Historical Fantasy
Word Count: 96K

NoQS Monster 13 - Drowning in Rivers, YA Contemp.

Name: Heidi Peitz
Twitter Handle: @hpeitz
Title: DROWNING IN RIVERS
Genre: YA Contemporary
Word Count: 76K

NoQS Monster 12 - A Trace of Madness, YA Fantasy

Name: Diana Pinguicha
Twitter Handle: @pinguicha
Title: A TRACE OF MADNESS
Genre: YA Fantasy
Word Count: 101K

NoQS Monster 11 - Battle of Wonderland Gardens, MG Fantasy Adv.

Name: Mike Hays
Twitter Handle: @coachhays64
Title: THE BATTLE OF WONDERLAND GARDENS
Genre: MG Fantasy Adventure
Word Count: 41K

Oct 27, 2015

NoQS Monster 10 - End of Magic, MG Fantasy

Name: Marc Moshcatel
Title: END OF MAGIC
Genre: MG Fantasy
Word Count: 29K

NoQS Monster 9 - The Coins of Mammon, Adult Epic Fantasy

Name: Steve Westenra
Twitter Handle: @SteveWestenra
Title: THE COINS OF MAMMON
Genre: Adult Epic Fantasy
Word Count: 164K

NoQS Monster 8 - Project Siren, YA Contemp Fantasy

Name: Karen McManus
Twitter Handle: @writerkmc
Title: PROJECT SIREN
Genre: YA Contemporary Fantasy
Word Count: 73K

NoQS Monster 7 - Messy, MG Contemp

Name: Joni Pope
Twitter Handle: LittleJoni00
Title: MESSY
Genre: MG Contemporary
Word Count: 41K

NoQS Monster 6 - All Hallows Lane, MG Fantasy Horror

Name: Darren Gannuch
Twitter Handle: @DGannuch
Title: ALL HALLOWS LANE
Genre: MG  Fantasy Horror
Word Count: 54K

NoQS Monster 5 - Romy Ever After, YA Contemp Romance

Name: Gillian Libby
Twitter Handle: @gillianlibby
Title: ROMY EVER AFTER
Genre:YA Contemporary Romance
Word Count: 65K

NoQS Monster 4 - King of the Wild Bunch, MG Adventure

Name: Emily Cushing
Twitter Handle: @emcushi
Title: KING OF THE WILD BUNCH
Genre: MG Adventure
Word Count: 47K

NoQS Monster 3 - The Wrong Side, NA Thriller

Name: Rachael Dahl
Twitter Handle: @DahlRachael
Title: THE WRONG SIDE
Genre: New Adult Thriller
Word Count: 88K

NoQS Monster 2 - Cheating Death, Adult Spec.

Name: Chris Jones (writing as CJ Lehi)
Twitter Handle: @cjlehi
Title: CHEATING DEATH
Genre: Adult Speculative
Word Count: 92K

NoQS Monster 1 - 28 Days, YA Contemp.

Name: Abbey L. Nash
Twitter Handle: @nash_abbey
Title: 28 DAYS
Genre: YA Contemporary
Word Count: 73K

Oct 19, 2015

The Monsters of NoQS 2015





Taking on the slush pile is a grueling task. With a limited number of slots to fill, SO many good entries went unchosen. I know the last word anyone wants to hear is 'subjective', but that's truly the best word to describe how we have to approach slush with so many contenders.

A HUGE congrats to everyone brave enough to take the plunge. Best of luck in the future.

Without further ado, it's time to reveal the Monsters of Nightmare on Query Street 2015!





In no particular order:

 

The Lamb
28 Days
Such the Vultures Love
The Coins of Mammon (New Addition)
Cheating Death
In the Space Between
End of Magic
Messy
Romy Ever After
King of the Wild Bunch
Jar of Hearts
The Treasures of Dodrazeb
Project Siren
The Battle of Wonderland Gardens
The Stolen Girl
Trace of Madness
Serengeti
Drowning in Rivers
All Hallows Lane
The Wrong Side



Be sure to check Michelle's blog for her picks.



Keep an eye on your inbox. Mentors will be contacting you through the email you used to enter the contest. If that's not your actual email because a friend mailed yours in, you'd better let me know. Each entry will get one mentor assigned to them. 

Please return your revised entry using the same format to the contest email by 8pm on October 26th. We need that time to swat down unruly formatting and create the posts before the agent round. Please do not be late. We will go live without you.

Come back on October 29th to see the agents Shriek, Scream and Shiver! 

Oct 15, 2015

Submission Day for NoQS!


The submission window opens today at 4:00 pm EST!





The submission window opens at 4:00 pm (EST) on October 15th. Don't send too soon or your entry will be deleted. There will be email confirmation. The window will close when we receive 250 entries.

Michelle and Mike will make twenty picks each, and those twenty picks will go up on our blogs from October 29th through the 30th. Before this, there will be a mentor round to whip that entry into shape. We've already got amazing mentors lined up, so know that your entries will be polished for the agents.

We are accepting all age categories and genres, excluding picture books and erotica. But be sure to check our list of agents to see if they represent your book's genre.

If you plan on participating in the contest, you have to be following all our blogs (MichelleMike). And you'll want to be on twitter for the party.

ONLY ONE ENTRY PER PERSON. DO NOT TRY USING MULTIPLE EMAIL ADDRESSES. THIS DOES NOT MEAN ONE PER WRITING PEN NAME. ONE AND ONE ONLY.

It's pretty simple, actually.

But there's a catch.

Along with your query and 250, you must write a SHORT paragraph (no more than 100 words) about your main character. This is the question you must answer:

What is your main character's most fearsome obsession?

The Format:


Send all your submission to nightmareonquerystreet (at) yahoo (dot) com. Only one submission per email address AND person is allowed.

Here's how it should be formatted (yes, include the bolded and everything!). Please use Times New Roman (or equivalent), 12 pt font, and put spaces between paragraphs. No indents or tabs are needed.

Subject Line: NoQS: TITLE, Age Category + Genre
(example: NoQS: GRUDGING, Adult Epic Fantasy)



INSIDE THE EMAIL:

Name: Michelle Hauck
Twitter Handle: @Michelle4Laughs
Title: GRUDGING (yes, caps!)
Genre: Adult Epic Fantasy (Age category and genre. YA/MG is not a genre.)
Word Count: XX,XXX

Note: Twitter handle is not required, just useful in finding you.


My Main Character's Most Fearsome Obsession is:

My MC's most fearsome obsession is potatoes. He can't stop eating those suckers--fried, mashed, frenched--gotta have them. (Please, spend some time on this! We will be looking at this to make up for gaps in the query and 250. It gives us a chance to know your characters better. It doesn't have to be horror-scary. It can be more subtle. Remember 100 words or less.)

Query:

Here is my fantastic query! DO NOT INCLUDE BIO OR COMPS PARAGRAPH.Try to stay in the 250-300 word range. Please put spaces between paragraphs and don't indent.

First 250 words:

Here are the first 250 words of my manuscript, and I will not end in the middle of a sentence, even if I hit 255 words. Do not abuse and send 260. Keep it fair for all by staying close to 250.


Entries will be disqualified at our discretion for rule violation.

And that's it! Send in that email during the submission window and you're ready to go. There will be a confirmation email.

We're Tweeting under the hashtag #NoQS. 

Topics for the twitter party are as follows:

October 15: All day, shout out the genre and age category you're sending. After 4:00 shout out if you got in.

October 16: What costume would your MC character wear for Halloween?

October 17: What's the most fearsome thing about querying?

October 18: Where do you hail from? It's kinda neat to find other writers near you. Shout out your approximate location and make new friends. 

October 19: What's your favorite part about contests? What benefits you the most? Help us make the next one better by telling us.

October 20: Picks released. Tell us how you deal with stress as a writer. What helps while you wait on query letters? 

Best of luck to everyone submitting today. Competition will be fierce.

Oct 12, 2015

Agents of Nightmare on Query Street 2015 (partial list)

 The submission windows opens this Thursday! Check this post for details.


This is HALF of our list of agents. For the rest, go to Michelle's blog. 

NEW AGENT 

Caitlen Rubino-Bradway



I joined the LKG Agency in 2008, thereby disproving the theory that no English major ever does anything with their degree.  Before that I worked at another literary agency, Don Congdon Associates, where I had the behind-the-scenes thrill of seeing Kathryn Stockett’s The Help first come in (and getting one of the first reads). And before that I was getting my Masters in English and Publishing from Rosemont College. I have enjoyed my apprenticeship under Lauren very much, and I am now actively looking to build my own list, which includes (after a surprisingly minimal amount of begging and pleading on my part), securing Lauren’s agreement to open the agency to considering middle grade and young adult fiction.

In my spare time, I am an author in my own right (or is that write?).  My first book, Lady Vernon and Her Daughter, which I co-wrote with my mother, was released by Crown in 2009.  We also contributed to Jane Austen Made Me Do It, published by Ballantine in 2011.  My first middle grade novel, Ordinary Magic, was published by Bloomsbury Children’s in 2012.

Agency


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  Alisa Gus



I am… a mother, a wife, a daughter, a granddaughter, a slave to a very persnickety cat, a writer, a publisher, a foodie, a shoe hoarder, a people watcher, a conservationist, a screenwriter, a Redditor, a reluctant (but apparently prolific) blogger... So who am I, really? Still figuring that one out. Update as I go along ;-)

Most recently, I am the Marketing side of Curiosity Quills Press, a new literary portal and publishing house aimed at exposing readers to new themes, ideas, and books to match, while supporting fellow authors.

I am also the co-author, along with my husband Eugene Teplitsky, of a Young Adult science fiction novel called Gatecrashers.

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 Adrienne Szpyrka




I am an assistant editor at Sky Pony Press, searching for new middle grade and young adult voices. I acquire mostly contemporary and historical fiction, but read all genres in my spare time and have a weak spot for a good princess story. I love books that make me feel something (bonus points if they make me laugh), and I'm always looking for stories that bring more diversity to the kids book world. Strong characterization is a must. 


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Danielle Barthel



Following her completion of the Denver Publishing Institute after graduation, Danielle began interning at Writers House. While there, she realized she wanted to put her English degree and love of the written word to work at a literary agency. She worked as a full-time assistant for three years, and continues to help keep the New Leaf offices running smoothly in her role of Coordinator of Team and Client Services.

In her downtime, she can be found with a cup of tea, a bar of chocolate, or really good book...sometimes all together.

Twitter

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Laura Zats



Laura Zats graduated from Grinnell College with degrees in English and anthropology. While completing her studies, she took advantage of her love of Young Adult (YA) literature and wrote a thesis on identity formation in YA. She’s been working as an editor since 2011 and has held positions at companies in both the US and the UK. In 2013, Laura joined Team Red Sofa as an intern but quickly became more of an apprentice, leveling up to Associate Agent in the same year.

Even though she loved YA books first, titles that are Middle Grade, romance, and Sci-fi/Fantasy have been slowly taking hold. Picking a favorite genre now would be like choosing between puppies and kittens. In her free time, Laura likes to craft, swing dance, bake, and binge on Netflix marathons of Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Doctor Who.


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Melissa Jeglinski



A graduate of Clarion University of Pennsylvania, where she majored in English with a writing concentration, Melissa began her career as an editor with Harlequin Enterprises. Looking to work with a variety of authors and genres, she joined The Knight Agency in 2008.  With over two decades experience in the publishing industry, Melissa has fostered her clients to National prominence including a recent Newbery Honor. She is a member of RWA and AAR. Melissa is currently seeking projects in the following areas:  Romance (contemporary, category, historical, inspirational) Young Adult, Middle Grade, Women’s Fiction and Mystery. 


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Uwe Stender



Literary Agent Dr. Uwe Stender is a Full Member of the AAR (Association of Authors' Representatives). He is interested in all kinds of commercial fiction, especially Young Adult, Middle Grade, Mysteries, and Women's Fiction. He is also interested in all kinds of non-fiction projects. But surprise him, his tastes are eclectic, and he may just love what you wrote!

His favorite five novels right now are: Eleanor And Park, How It Went Down, Code Name Verity, High Fidelity, and The Big Sleep.


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Dawn Frederick



Dawn Michelle Frederick is the owner and literary agent of Red Sofa Literary, established at the end of 2008. She brings a broad knowledge of the book business to the table, bringing multiple years of experience as a bookseller in the independent, chain, and specialty stores; sales, marketing, & book development at a YA publisher, and a literary agent at Sebastian Literary Agency. She carries a B.S. in Human Ecology, and a M.S. in Information Sciences from an ALA accredited institution. Dawn is a co-founder of the MN Publishing Tweet Up, the News chair for the Twin Cities Advisory Council for MPR, and a teaching artist at Loft Literary. 


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Victoria Selvaggio




Victoria A. Selvaggio joins The Jennifer De Chiara Literary Agency as an Associate Agent with a strong background in business ownership and with over six years of actively working as a volunteer and Regional Advisor for SCBWI: Northern Ohio.  Drawn to the publishing scene first as an author writing all genres, with her most recent publication in the 2015 Children’s Writer’s and Illustrator’s Market, Vicki’s passion for honing the craft carried over into reading manuscripts for the agency in 2013. Currently, she is excited to read compelling manuscripts that will resonate with her long after she’s done.

Agency
Website
Twitter 

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Jennifer Azantian



Founder Jennifer Azantian graduated with a B.S. in clinical and developmental psychology from the University of California, San Diego where she was an executive editor for the Trition Psychology Report. In 2011, she began her agenting career, first as an intern and then as an assistant and associate, at the Sandra Dijkstra Literary Agency. In 2014, while working with senior agent and entertainment lawyer Paul Levine, Jennifer opened her own agency specializing in speculative fiction. 


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Lisa Abellera



Lisa Abellera joined Kimberley Cameron and Associates in 2013 with a background in management, marketing, and finance. She has studied creative writing, design and business, earning her B.A. in Strategic Management from Dominican University of CA and her M.F.A. in Creative Writing from University of San Francisco.

Lisa had a successful career in the corporate world before joining the world of publishing. After editorial internships with an independent press and Kimberley Cameron & Associates, she now follows her true passion for books and writing. She leverages her business and marketing expertise to help authors navigate the complexities of publishing. She is excited to develop talented authors and help advance their careers.

She is actively building her client list with both debut and established authors. She is looking to form long-term, collaborative relationships with writers who are committed to putting forth their best work.


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Beth Cambell



After an academic career filled with publishing internships, Beth joined BookEnds as a literary assistant in September 2012 and was promoted to Assistant Literary Agent in 2015. She's diligently building her client list and is always excited to meet an author with an excellent story. She's also spent years as the company's rights coordinator and now works alongside Moe to continue selling foreign and audio rights.

Beth's obsession with books began with a distinct fantasy/sci-fi flavor, and she's happily never kicked the addiction. She is primarily interested in signing clients within those genres, YA, romantic suspense, and mystery. She loves seeing diverse characters (sexuality, gender, race, you name it!) and strong friendships across all genres.

Beth currently lives in New Jersey with her husband and their cat. Outside of reading, her personal hobbies include drawing, cooking, gaming, and spending far too much time on the Internet.


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Stacey Donaghy



Stacey Donaghy is a strong advocate for her writers.  She believes in helping to build the careers of her clients, with long term goals in mind.

Stacey began her career with the Corvisiero Literary Agency in New York, where she wore many hats from team manager and trainer, to intern, to agent.   This coupled with her  experience and formal education and training in the areas of  Management, Social Services and Adult Education, Stacey brings a wealth of technical and professional experience to the literary world.  As a manager in the field of Education & Training, her roles have included people management, curriculum development, academic editing, marketing, creative design, publishing, proposal writing, contract negotiations and public speaking.  Her training also includes Principled Negotiation Techniques as it applies to relationships and contracts.

Stacey represents NY Times, USA Today, and Amazon Bestselling Authors, as well as Authors who have been nominated or have won awards for various works.


Oct 7, 2015

Mentors of Nightmare on Query Street 2015 (partial list)



I know you'll want to get to know the mentors who will be helping the finalists perfect their query letter and first 250 words. But first a few dates for Nightmare on Query Street:

Submission Window Opens: October 15th 4:00 pm EST
Final Picks are Announced: October 20th undecided time
Mentors Go to Work: October 21th - 26th
Revised Entries Due Back: October 26th at 8 pm
Agent round: October 29th - 30th

Half of the list of amazing mentors is here. To see the other half of the list, visit Michelle's blog. Some of the mentors have been helping our contests for ages and some are brand new. Please give all of them a big welcome!


 Marty Mayberry


Marty Mayberry writes anything from young adult sci-fi and contemporary, to adult historical fantasy. When she’s not dreaming up ways to mess with her character's lives, she works as an RN/Clinical Documentation Specialist. She has a BA in International Affairs in German and an Associate’s Degree in Nursing. She lives in New England with her husband and children, as well as three neurotic cats and a geriatric chocolate lab. She's a member of SCBWI, YARWA, and a PRO member of RWA. Her young adult sci-fi thriller recently won the YARWA's Rosemary Award.

She’s represented by Jessica Watterson of the Sandra Dijkstra Agency: West Coast Literary Agents: Sandra Dijkstra Literary Agency

Twitter
Website

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Michelle Hazen



Michelle Hazen is a nomad with a writing problem. Years ago, she and her husband ducked out of the 9 to 5 world and moved into their truck. She found her voice with the support of the online fanfiction community, and once she started typing, she never looked back. She has written most of her books in odd places, including a bus in Thailand, an off-the-grid cabin in the Sawtooth Mountains, a golf cart in a sandstorm, a rental car during a heat wave in the Mohave Desert and a beach in Honduras.

Michelle was awarded first place in the 2015 NTRWA Great Expectations Contest, New Adult genre. Her work is represented by Naomi Davis of Inklings Literary. Michelle is the author of YA suspense novella, Becoming Katelyn, and the Kindle Worlds bestselling author of the Desperate Love Trilogy, the In Time We Trust Trilogy, Happily Ever After: Salvatore Style, and Sanguine Veritas.

Website

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 Christina Dalcher



Christina Dalcher is an academic linguist and novelist from Somewhere in the American South. She writes adult thrillers featuring a down-on-her-luck phonetician under her real name, and middle-grade guy-reads under a pseudonym she hasn't invented yet. Once in a while, she tweets via @CVDalcher.

Between novels, Christina plays around with flash fiction. You can find her work in various corners of the Internet, including The Molotov Cocktail, Pidgeonholes, Platform for Prose, Bethlehem Writers Roundtable, https://christinadalcher.wordpress.com, and sometimes in the circular file beside her desk. She also reads slush for Freeze Frame Fiction and Maniacal Anthology.

She owns a dog, but not a mobile phone, and is represented by Alec Shane of Writers House.

Website
Twitter

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Heather Van Fleet




Contemporary romance author Heather Van Fleet is stay-at-home-mom turned book boyfriend connoisseur She’s a wife to her high school sweetheart, a mom to three little girls, and in her spare time you can find her with her head buried in her Kindle, guzzling down copious amounts of coffee. Heather is represented by Stacey Donaghy og Donaghy Literary and is also a content editor for BookFish Books.

Website
Twitter

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Richard Pearson




Richard Pearson is the author of THE ROLE an LGBT Novel which explores the backstage drama behind a Broadway show. It will be published by Lethe Press in February of 2016. Richard is a triple threat: Author, Actor, and Attorney. When he's not performing in New York City, he writes and works from his home in Jersey City, which he shares with his loving husband and newborn baby daughter.

Blog
Twitter
Press

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Kim Long




Kim Long is an attorney in the Chicagoland area, where she spends her days expressing her clients’ (always true) stories to judges and juries. She writes MG and YA contemporary fantasy that contain a sprinkle of science and is represented by Sara Crowe at Harvey Klinger. When not managing her fantasy baseball and football teams, she can be found biking, watching Star Wars for the zillionth time, or teaching her nieces about the importance of choosing the correct racer (Toad) and vehicle (standard bike) to win in Mario Kart.

Blog
Twitter

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Judy Clemens



Judy Clemens is the Anthony and Agatha-nominated author of the Stella Crown series, the Grim Reaper Mysteries, and Lost Sons. She lives in beautiful rural Ohio and is represented by Uwe Stender of TriadaUS.

Website
Facebook

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Betsy Aldredge

 


Betsy Aldredge is a former magazine editor turned communications professional who writes about quirky characters in many genres. Betsy and her co-writer, Carrie DuBois-Shaw, were named Grand Champions of Query Kombat 2014 for their YA Contemporary Romance, Sasquatch, Love, and Other Imaginary Things. The entry, nicknamed “Shalom Sasquatch,” led to signing with the wonderful Christa Heschke at McIntosh and Otis.

Blog
Twitter

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LS Hawker


LS Hawker grew up in suburban Denver, indulging her worrisome obsession with true-crime books, and writing stories about anthropomorphic fruit and juvenile delinquents. She wrote her first novel at 14.

Armed with a B.S. in journalism from the University of Kansas, she had a radio show called “People Are So Stupid,” edited a trade magazine, and worked as a traveling Kmart portrait photographer, but never lost her passion for fiction writing. She has a three-book deal with HarperCollins Witness Impulse, the first of which, THE DROWNING GAME, was released on September 22.

She’s got a hilarious, supportive husband, two brilliant daughters, and a massive music collection. She lives in Colorado but considers Kansas her spiritual homeland.

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Wendy Nikel


When Wendy Nikel isn't traveling in time, exploring magical islands, or investigating mysterious phenomena, she enjoys a quiet life near Utah's Wasatch Mountains with her husband and sons. She has a degree in elementary education, a fondness for road trips, and a terrible habit of forgetting where she's left her cup of tea. Her short fiction has been published by AE, Daily Science Fiction, and others. She is a member of the SFWA and contributor to Operation Awesome.

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Erika David


Erika David is a Toronto-area writer of middle grade and young adult fiction, represented by Eric Myers at Dystel & Goderich. Given her life-long love of sci-fi and fantasy, it’s probably no surprise her favorite words are What if…? In other news, Erika is an unrepentant dark-chocoholic, a fruity tea drinker, and a huge dog lover. Sense 8 and Mr. Robot are her current, guilty pleasures.
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Nicole Tone



Nicole Tone has always had a passion for writing. She is a current MFA Writing candidate at Savannah College of Art and Design and has a Bachelor's degree in Creative Writing and Literature. She is a current editor at Pandamoon Publishing and the Membership Director for the Women's Fiction Writers Association. When she isn't writing, she likes to dabble in photography, sketching, and traveling. She has a deep love for herbal tea, craft beer, and good coffee.

Nicole lives in Buffalo, NY, with her husband, three cats, and two very large dogs.

Website
 

 

Oct 2, 2015

Nightmare on Query Street: What you need to know.




We're back with over 20 agents and even more mentors!

It's Nightmare Time!



Don’t have a scary manuscript, DON'T WORRY. Just read on.

A brand new year, a brand new evil.

This contest, as it runs in the Halloween time, is all about FEAR.


The Details:

The submission window opens at 4:00 pm (EST) on October 15th. Don't send too soon or your entry will be deleted. There will be email confirmation. The window will close when we receive 250 entries.

Michelle and Mike will make twenty picks each, and those twenty picks will go up on our blogs from October 29th through the 30th. Before this, there will be a mentor round to whip that entry into shape. We've already got amazing mentors lined up, so know that your entries will be polished for the agents.

We are accepting all age categories and genres, excluding picture books and erotica. But be sure to check our list of agents when it goes live to see if they represent your book's genre.


If you plan on participating in the contest, you have to be following all our blogs (Michelle, Mike). And you'll want to be on twitter for the party.

ONLY ONE ENTRY PER PERSON. DO NOT TRY USING MULTIPLE EMAIL ADDRESSES. THIS DOES NOT MEAN ONE PER WRITING PEN NAME. ONE AND ONE ONLY.

It's pretty simple, actually.

But there's a catch.

Along with your query and 250, you must write a SHORT paragraph (no more than 100 words) about your main character. This is the question you must answer:

What is your main character's most fearsome obsession?

The Format:


Send all your submission to nightmareonquerystreet (at) yahoo (dot) com. Only one submission per email address AND person is allowed.

Here's how it should be formatted (yes, include the bolded and everything!). Please use Times New Roman (or equivalent), 12 pt font, and put spaces between paragraphs. No indents or tabs are needed.


Subject Line: NoQS: TITLE, Age Category + Genre
(example: NoQS: GRUDGING, Adult Epic Fantasy)


INSIDE THE EMAIL:

Name: Michelle Hauck
Twitter Handle: @Michelle4Laughs
Title: GRUDGING (yes, caps!)
Genre: Adult Epic Fantasy (Age category and genre. YA/MG is not a genre.)
Word Count: XX,XXX

Note: Twitter handle is not required, just useful in finding you.


My Main Character's Most Fearsome Obsession is:


My MC's most fearsome obstacle is potatoes. (Please, spend some time on this! We will be looking at this to make up for gaps in the query and 250. It gives us a chance to know your characters better. It doesn't have to be horror-scary. It can be more subtle. Remember 100 words or less.)


Query:


Here is my fantastic query! DO NOT INCLUDE BIO OR COMPS PARAGRAPH. Try to stay in the 250-300 word range. Please put spaces between paragraphs and don't indent.


First 250 words:


Here are the first 250 words of my manuscript, and I will not end in the middle of a sentence, even if I hit 255 words. Do not abuse and send 260. Keep it fair for all but staying close to 250.

Entries will be disqualified at our discretion for rule violation.

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Jul 7, 2015

2015 Query Kombat Picture Book Category Champion: Niki Schoenfel

Niki Schoenfel


Niki Masse Schoenfeldt grew up in a small town in Western Massachusetts where she began writing stories as soon as she could pick up a pencil. Now, a displaced New Englander living in the south, she is a stay-at-home mom and is finally able to pursue her dream. Besides being a full time writer, Niki considers herself a wife, a mom, a friend and a professional beach bum. She is happiest with her toes in the sand and a book in her hand. She has a love for American History, baseball, (Go Red Sox!) nature and animals. She even once saved a sheep from drowning. You can follow her on twitter Twitter or check out her blog .






PB Championship Entry:

Entry Nickname: Eavesdropping Monkey
Title: FAMILY REUNION
Word count: 650
Genre: Children’s Picture Book - Funny

Query:


The elephants are planning a family reunion. When the monkeys overhear, they decide to have one, too. But they’re not the only ones. The whole family reunion concept is too good to miss out on and it spreads across the jungle like a Savanna grass fire! Soon the watering hole is filled to capacity with animals of different species; which causes a real bungle in the jungle. Tempers flare as each species fights for their right to reunite with their own kind. Finally, a wise frog speaks up with a whole new concept that blows the family reunion idea right out of the watering hole! FAMILY REUNION is an amusing tale of diversity and acceptance. It is approximately 650 words and is written mainly for the 4-8 age range.

First 250 words:


On a hot, steamy day in the Jungle of Kree,
A sly, nosey monkey swung from a tree.
He was eavesdropping on a large elephant herd,
And he hung there and listened to every last word.

“We’ll invite all our cousins from near and afar,”
Said the matriarch queen named Ali Dalmar.

2015 Query Kombat Mid-Grade Category Champion: Kairlin Hundscheid

Kaitlin Hundscheid




Kaitlin lives and teaches in Alabama. Though she prefers Earl Grey to sweet tea, Kaitlin is a staunch Southerner who believes in the power of y’all, yes ma’am, and darlin’. She spends her free time writing, reading, and harassing her cat. One day she’d like to own a brace of corgis and enough sheep to keep them entertained.


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MG Championship Entry:


Entry Nickname:
Librarians, Curses, and Mysteries – Oh My!
Title:
The Curious Curse of the Lonely Library
Word Count: 56k
Genre: Upper Middle Grade Low Fantasy

Query:

The Pickettsville library has moldered in silence for two hundred years, but Theodore Plumford can sense that it’s special. Not just any library was founded by a madman.

Determined to spend the summer reading, twelve-year-old Theodore coaxes his reluctant siblings to explore the unusually grand library with him. Though the rest of Pickettsville refuses to darken its doors, the majestic building and its lively librarians soon enthrall the children. But when they discover that characters from the books are haunting the halls, an investigation into the library’s secrets leads them deep into one family’s peculiar history and one man’s troubled life.

As the Plumfords and librarians unravel the past, the library’s future seems brighter. But Theodore’s impetuous brother Hugo would rather have an adventure than follow orders, even if it throws the library into chaos. With the town clamoring to demolish the building, the characters fighting for their freedom, and Hugo playing by his own rules, Theodore’s mettle will be tested. The bookworm who has always lived through others’ stories must learn how to be his own hero if he’s going to save the library.

First 250:


Theodore Plumford’s neck prickled when they drove past the building on their way into town. The rest of Main Street was a collection of shabby stores, but this place stood apart like a wild beast among tabby cats.

Six white columns guarded a wide double door, and cold, silent windows rose between the pillars. On top of the building, rosy light streamed through the panes of a glass dome. It looked like a ball of fire upon a mammoth block of ice.

“Mom, what’s that?”

Mrs. Plumford twisted in her seat to follow Theodore’s pointing finger. She squinted into the sun. “We’ve never been there. You’ll have to ask your aunt.”

Theodore’s younger sister Lucy squirmed around to look at the building before it disappeared from view. “It looks scary,” she whispered.

“It looks boring,” said Hugo Plumford, elbowing Lucy in the center seat to make more room for himself. “Are we there yet?”

“Almost,” said Mr. Plumford. He turned the car into a neighborhood of prim houses in tidy rows, each so alike they might have been pressed from the same mold.

Hugo squashed his nose against the glass and groaned. “Can’t I go with you?”

“No,” said Mr. Plumford. “I’d prefer you weren’t eaten by a crocodile.”

“But I wouldn’t!”

“Hugo, you’d be trying to measure its teeth the minute I turned my back.”

Theodore stifled a sigh and hunkered over his book, determined to ignore the hundredth round of this debate.

2015 Query Kombat Young Adult Category Champion: Leslie Miller

Leslie Miller

Leslie Miller grew up on a steady diet of Dr. Seuss until graduating to Nancy Drew. She is still on the lookout for wacky words and important clues, even to this day. Currently, Leslie lives near Denver, Colorado where she works as a ghostwriter and developmental editor by day, novelist by night, and watercolor artist whenever she has time. An incurable bookworm growing up, Leslie is surprised it took her so many years to start writing her own stories.

Leslie loves color and tries to incorporate it into her writing as vividly as in her paintings. A native New Yorker, Leslie worked in NY’s fashion industry as a dress patternmaker. She says, “You can take the girl out of fashion, but you can never take the fashion out of the girl.” Leslie’s novels incorporate her sense of whimsy and adventure. She hopes to take readers on a journey they won’t soon forget.

In her spare time, she paints watercolors, tramples merrily through thrift shops, binge-watches Shark Tank, and loudly out-sings contestants on The Voice.

Check out Leslie’s paintings on her Pinterest page. Contact Leslie for developmental and content editing or ghostwriting services. Check out her Facebook, Twitter, and YoutTbe!

YA Championship Entry:


Entry Nickname:
Elephants Never Forget
Title: THE IVORY NEEDLE
Word Count: 72K
Genre: YA Contemporary Fantasy

Query:

Only two are yet remaining,
Precious magic ever waning . . .

That’s just part of the mysterious message 16-yr-old Chessie receives when she’s forced to visit her great-grandmother for the summer. Bad enough Gram lives in middle-of-nowhere, Kenya. But when Chessie’s contacted by the spirit of Jhelani, an eons-dead elephant, things take a total left turn toward weird. Communicating with cryptic songs and strange symbols, Jhelani’s message slowly emerges: if someone cannot save the last of her once-immortal tribe, the Earth may pay an unknown price. Freaked out and overwhelmed, Chessie shuts down, breaks communication, and refuses to help.

Meanwhile, Kenyan teen Daniel can’t feed his family when his crops fail. Desperate for work, he’s coerced into a gang of poachers with their sights set on a huge payday: the remaining elephants of Jhelani’s tribe. Just this one job, he swears. Then he’ll find honest work. Hold his head up again.

Chessie finally comes to a decision. She wants to be the kind of person who, as Gram would say, “grabs life by the tusks.” But by the time she finds the missing elephants, the poachers are closing in. With elephants charging and bullets flying, Chessie’s taken prisoner and her world and Daniel’s collide. To survive, Chessie must conquer her fears and seize a dangerous opportunity to escape. And Daniel must decide where he’ll draw the line: thief, poacher, or accessory to murder.

First 250:

When your family falls apart, I suppose you shouldn’t expect anything to be the same again. Not even your mother’s smile.

Mom’s goofy I-love-my-life smile hadn’t been seen in months, and I’d become all too familiar with the distant impostor that had replaced it. But the smile she wore right now? Pretty sure I’d never seen that one before. Like something you’d grab at the mall without stopping to try it on, it was too tight and way too bright.

And she was cooking, for the first time in months. “Mom? What’s going on?” I dropped into a kitchen chair and watched her pull something from the oven.

“Roast chicken? Dibs on the drumstick,” Bent shouted, slamming his scrawny ten-year-old frame into the chair nearest the chicken. He leaned across the table, freckled nose practically up the bird’s butt, and took a deep sniff. “Look, Chessie, mac-n-cheese, too.”

Mom set a tray of steaming cornbread on the table and sat down, still beaming. “Your great-gram has invited us to visit her. In Africa.”

I paused, forkful of mac-n-cheese halfway to my mouth. My stomach felt hollow. I had the feeling no amount of mac-n-cheese was going to fill it, not even one with four gourmet cheeses and a crispy crumb topping. “Can you get enough time off for a trip like that?”

Her smile flickered like the lights during a thunderstorm, right before the power went out for good. “I . . . I can’t go. But you two will go without me.”

2015 Query Kombat New Adult Category Champions: Sarah Emery & Carlyn Greenwald

Since one entry switched age-category mid-way through the contest, we've got TWO NA Champions that will share the badge/award :D (No fighting.)

Sarah Emery & Carlyn Greenwald





Sarah is a mom, army wife, and vegan baker. In her spare time, she cleans pug hair off all surfaces and wishes her migraines would let her drink more coffee. A New Englander by birth, she's thrilled to live in northern New York after sweltering away in the south for five years. She loves writing YA and NA because that age represents a time of hope and change, and she believes we could all use a little more of each. She can usually be found wasting time on twitter.






Entry Nickname: A Thousand Miles Astray
Title: PERMANENTLY UNDECLARED
Word Count: 60,000
Genre: NA Contemporary

Query:

Eighteen-year-old Lotus Adams has no interest in college. The classes are boring, the frat boys are slobbery, and the beer is downright nasty. She’d rather be on the open road in her dad’s vintage RV, Flora, but without some costly repairs, Flora is unlivable. Her mom doesn’t want her to go traipsing around the country like her long-gone dad, so she makes Lotus a deal. Finish her first year of college with a 3.5 GPA, and mom will pay for all Flora’s repairs.

For eighteen-year-old Aaron Kim, the anonymity of college is a relief. After finding his girlfriend in bed with a friend, he threw himself into homework, work, and working out. Aside from his family and his best friend, he’s cut himself off from everyone. But after meeting free-spirited Lotus, he wonders if he was wrong to drop out of life. Already committed to his education, he decides to give love another chance.

Only Lotus knows their time together is limited. When she finishes the year and gets Flora, she’s never going back to college, never going back to live with her workaholic, absent mom. Instead of school, she’ll tour the country, and Aaron will stay at college. With freshman year ticking to a close, Aaron has to stop Lotus from dropping out of school and their relationship. If he fails, they’ll lose each other forever.

First 250:

The grassy quad stretched out in front of me, an endless sea of students adorned in Crandall State’s colors. I was too busy sweating my ass off to look for my new roommate, so I plopped down on the edge of the lawn.

“Like sheep,” I muttered. This was too much. I needed space and the open road. I needed to know where dad was, not waste another year at school.

“What’s that?” asked the guy next to me.

“We’re sheep. What’s the point of all this, anyway? Some form of torture?”

“I think they call it ‘freshman orientation,’ actually.” He sounded amused and I sneaked a peek at him, wondering why he was wasting his breath. He stared at me from under black Ray-Bans, his white hat turned backwards. Dumb. “I take it you aren’t a fan of higher learning?”

“It was my mom’s idea. You know, if that hat was on the right way, you wouldn’t need the sunglasses.”

He smiled broadly, his shiny perfect teeth flashing at me. “I always need the sunglasses. This way, the hat stays out of my way.”

Ridiculous. “Then why wear the hat at all?”

“Bad hair day.” Everything in me said turn away, kill this conversation now.

“What, out of mousse before the first day?”

Dammit.

“Maybe I misplaced my flat iron.” He yanked off the hat and pulled his hand through glossy black hair. It fell into place immediately.

Not a bad hair day.




Carlyn Greenwald is a writer, student, and decently sized superhero, mystery, and animation nerd. Her writing passion lies in the problems of 14-24 year olds, within a range of subgenres from mystery to historical. Anything that has at least one murder, a nice-looking guy, and some witty banter will do. When not writing, she enjoys reading, swimming, drawing, and running multi-fandom blogs (Tumblr: thewittywriter). She splits her time between Manhattan Beach, CA with her family and University of Southern California with various wacky roommates.

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Entry Nickname:
A Girl and Her Serial Killer
Title: The Confidant
Word count:
62k
Genre:
NA Thriller

Query:

18-year-old Stella Stokes has a secret: Gideon, a dashing English serial killer in the novels she writes, actually talks to her. He’s been by her side, offering somewhat twisted peanut gallery commentary, advice, and affection for every pathetic turn in her adolescent life. Sure, some of his darker suggestions scareher, she’s never been worried about his presence. After all, she’s the only one who can interact with him; he can’t really kill anyone.

The summer following high school graduation, Stella and her best friend, supernatural-obsessed, trans-man Quinn, decide to take a few weeks to explore California. However, their first stop at an idyllic beach town isn’t quite as calming as they would’ve hoped: a local’s prank gone horribly wrong leaves Quinn and Stella standing dumbstruck over four dead bodies. As they clean up the mess and flee town, Stella can’t help but notice Gideon’s signature all over the murders.

Now, Stella has no choice but figure out what Gideon is: ghost, demon, byproduct of mental illness, or something else entirely. Because if Gideon is more than an imaginary friend, not only could he really begin a murder spree, but maybe he really could force her to kill with him. As bodies stack up around them, Stella has to keep one step ahead of the authorities, keep Quinn safe, and most importantly, prove that the writer is more powerful than the creation.

First 250 words:
"You're barmy if you don't think a paid professional screwing up your haircut is enough reason to kill them.”

I open my drawer and snatch the first two pieces of water-friendly fabric I see. The unsolicited advice comes from Gideon, who lies on my bed tossing a dragon figurine from hand to hand. We’ve been talking for five minutes, and I’m so done.

“No, Gideon, you’re…whatever you just said if you think I'm going to murder someone because she cut my hair too short,” I say. “Besides, you’re English. Your people would rather suffer in silence than complain about a subpar haircut. Turn around.”Gideon rolls his eyes and turns his back to me. I slip into my bikini.

“This figurine is a good density. An ideal bludgeoning weapon—”

“Don’t change the subject.”

I reach for my cover-up, but stop as Gideon wraps his arms around my waist.

“C’mon, poppet. Have I steered you wrong before?”

I resist a smile as he presses his lips to my throat. The moment almost lasts, but a thunk from inside my bathroom brings me back to reality: my best friend Quinn is changing in there, and when he comes out, he won’t be able to see Gideon.

After all, I'm the only person who can interact with him.

I pull away and return my figurine to the shelf, hoping Gideon gets the message. His words roll around my mind, and my eyes linger on the golden dragon.

It is dense.

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